Fishing Essay Graphic Organizer

This post may seem primarily for those who teach writing, as opposed to my usual posts that work for most content areas or teaching in general. However, even if you don’t teach writing, you might get a nugget by looking into how the analogy of fishing, coupled with some brain science (dual coding) or researched-based strategy (graphic organizer) can aid you in a way to present your content that makes sense to students when traditional ways may be failing. While graphic organizers can tap into the power of dual-coding merely by having shapes to which students then add words or text, when teachers (or students) also add images or clipart, it boosts the power of the learning so that it has a better chance of going from a student’s working memory to their long-term memory. I approach most of my activity creations with that in mind when students need something new from me to help them master the content.

Don’t you know I’m still standin’ better than I ever did?

Recently, my last-period class of freshmen were struggling with creating an introductory paragraph as we dove head-first into our blended essay writing unit. It’s still early in the school year, so students are still getting into the learning mode as opposed to summer mode. As we discussed the parts of an introductory paragraph, we reminded them of the hook sentence, the bridge sentences, and then the thesis. Students generally understand and remember the hook, and they know they have to have a thesis, but generally speaking, students in several grade levels struggle with those bridge sentences. As mine struggled, I mentioned to the class that I needed a better word for them than bridge. Something that we could use in class that made more sense. A student in the back of the class responded, “Well, you have a hook, what about fish? A hook needs fish.” Okay, in my 28 years of teaching, why didn’t I ever think of that? The rest of the class period, we successfully had students writing hooks, fish sentences, and thesis statements.

Lookin’ like a true survivor, feelin’ like a little kid

During my prep period the next day, I considered the analogy and modified it a bit as I created a graphic organizer for writing introductory paragraphs. While we have used outlines in the past, and those are great too, this class needed the information chunked, and I wanted to use research-based graphic organizers along with the learning or brain science of dual coding. I created a Google Slide that could be printed or used digitally to help students write good introductory paragraphs.

And I’m still standin’ after all this time

That worked so well that I decided to carry the analogy further and do the entire essay. A quick, but possibly not super thorough, turned up nothing like my Fishing strategy for essay writing, so here you go. I asked ChatGPT for help on the title page so that educators know they can use it for free but should not sell it or take credit for it, and ChatGPT not only told me how to word it, but that I should get a Creative Commons (CC) or other license for it too, so I did. (PESA-Public Educator Service Announcement: ChatGPT can help you with areas outside of lesson planning and grading papers.)

I’m still standin’ (Yeah, yeah, yeah)

Adapt it to fit your student’s needs. Instructions are in the gray non-printing areas for students completing it digitally. If you are using sheet protectors as whiteboards like I am, then these are great to print as a class set and put inside your DIY whiteboards to practice different parts of the essay. It works hand in hand with having students read a variety of texts too, without having to grade a lot of essays, in part or in whole, constantly. The practice and repetition with the essay structure will help students write organized essays, and these can be used throughout the year with any reading material, as long as you have or can create a question or prompt from the text. Use them for write/pair/shares (like think/pair/share but writing the thinking on the whiteboards or printed graphic organizers) too, and just like that, you have a valuable formative tool.

Feel free to grab the Fishing Essay Graphic Organizer template below. Specific permissions on how you can use it is explained on the first slide of the presentation.

Fishing Essay Graphic Organizer Template (Google Slides)

Headings are partial lyrics From Elton John’s song, I’m still standing.